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Subject: Re: FLASH: com see my newborn flash baby
From: John Bastin
Date: Fri, 25 Dec 1998 01:04:48 GMT

>Date: Thu, 24 Dec 1998 12:04:33 -0800
>To: flasheratshocker [dot] com
>From: mingo <mingoatsingnet [dot] com [dot] sg>
>Subject: FLASH: com see my newborn flash baby
>Reply-To: flasheratshocker [dot] com
>Hi guys,
>FINALLY, my first new flash baby is born, yeh..on 24 Dec 1998 (earlier
>then I expected..) welcome to take a look, don't have to bring any
>Thanks for those who help me to solve all the problems that I've
>encountered during the development, it took me about 2 weeks to
>complete this site. But not all the links are done yet.
>Now what you can see is my first flash game..the "shocking bird",
>and a link to all the funtabulastic flash site on the web !
>Welcome any kind of comments and submission to my flash links.
>No criticism on the "look" of my baby pls...to me its the most
>one! ;-) hahaha
I liked your effort, but one thing i think you should seriously consider
is consulting an editor with regards to text. Text, i grant, is
certainly not the primary focus of a flash presentation, but it is
highly important with respect to the overall impression created. I'm
talking about basic grammar and punctuation, as well as
syntax/semantics. Give me a shout if you think you'd like some work done
in this area, as it happens to be my specialty.

And Merry Christmas...

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