Re: FLASH: com see my newborn flash baby

[John Bastin]

>Date: Thu, 24 Dec 1998 12:04:33 -0800

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To: flashershocker [dot] com

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From: mingo <mingosingnet [dot] com [dot] sg>

>Subject: FLASH: com see my newborn flash baby

>

Reply-To: flashershocker [dot] com

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>Hi guys,

>

>FINALLY, my first new flash baby is born, yeh..on 24 Dec 1998 (earlier

>then I expected..) welcome to take a look, don't have to bring any

>gifts..

>

>http://home.pacific.net.sg/~ongnet

>

>Thanks for those who help me to solve all the problems that I've

>encountered during the development, it took me about 2 weeks to 

>complete this site. But not all the links are done yet.

>

>Now what you can see is my first flash game..the "shocking bird",

>and a link to all the funtabulastic flash site on the web !

>

>Welcome any kind of comments and submission to my flash links.

>No criticism on the "look" of my baby pls...to me its the most 

beautiful

>one! ;-) hahaha

>

I liked your effort, but one thing i think you should seriously consider 

is consulting an editor with regards to text. Text, i grant, is 

certainly not the primary focus of a flash presentation, but it is 

highly important with respect to the overall impression created. I'm 

talking about basic grammar and punctuation, as well as 

syntax/semantics. Give me a shout if you think you'd like some work done 

in this area, as it happens to be my specialty.


And Merry Christmas...



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