RE: FLASH: site check (yet another)

[JECJ]

Nice work Edward,


 I think most on this list will agree with me in that sometimes the most 

simple presentations are the most effective. In reading your critique 

request and the notes attached to the poem (yes, I read them) it seems as 

though you have indeed over-thought this.. relax and enjoy your work as 

your work. Just so you know it has inspired me to perhaps put my own poetry 

to Flash, if for nothing else, to see them come alive in a very different 

way, thanks. Now, if I can only find time between these pesky paying 

projects.. hmmmmm


I do however, agree with introducing a bit more blue ;)


Keep going,


-Jim




Champer Interactive

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-----Original Message-----

From:	Edward Cossette [SMTP:

cossettedelmar [dot] edu

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Sent:	Thursday, May 27, 1999 5:06 PM

To:	Flasher

Subject:	FLASH: site check (yet another)


Thanks in advance for taking the time to check out/critique the first Flash

URL I'm sending out to the list (gulp!)


Before you do, though, here are a couple of caveats to keep in mind when

looking it over:


1.  What I've done is a really simple use of Flash.  No really hardcore

blow-your-doors-off graphics/animation like the kind I've seen from others

on this list.  Not only do I not have the skills to do the really advanced

stuff, even if I did, this is meant to be a very simple thing.


2.  It's a poem that I've tried to bring to life in Flash, so the target

audience is one far more rooted in "text-based traditions" rather than the

icon/image world inhabited by many of you.  (That is not to say that it was

a "dead"  poem on the printed page . . . )  And don't be turned off by the

word "poem."  It's only 2 minutes long and hopefully won't bore anyone to

death.



Well, that's enough of me hesitating to get this URL out:


http://www.evolute.org/poetry/submariner/


Thanks,


Edward Cossette




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