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Subject: FLASH: re:Site check: http://www.pgeb.com/erica.htm
From: Gahlord Dewald
Date: Fri, 31 Mar 2000 04:00:40 +0100

Very beautiful work. A few comments though:

The intro is very long. It has me reaching for the skip intro button (which
isn't there). It's gorgeous but how about going for something perhaps a
little shorter or making some of your moves a little faster (your name, for
example, is a long name and I'm done reading your name before the animation
is complete which somehow annoys the hell out of me).

Overall the animation was very smooth and graceful. I also like the music,
I'm not certain if it is entirely appropriate. But it's pretty.

I'd like to see a little more of a marketing hook on it though. When I get
through the long animation I have no content on screen, only
navigation/interface. Tell me why I'm there so I know whether I want to
explore more or if I accidentally landed there by mistake.

Overall:
Gorgeous. But respect the user's time. Then again, my own site doesn't say
much/anything about purpose so maybe I'm just a hypocrit. Or an ipocrit.

G


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