Re: FLASH: New cartoon!

[David Gary]

brad merritt wrote:


> Hey everybody!

> Please tell me what you think of my cartoon. It may take a while to load,

> but I promise that it is worth it.

> Brad Merritt

>


Hiya Brad,


Nice little animated comic. I think you could keep the file size down by

making the buildings

and similiar graphics one symbol and just resizing them to make them look

like different building. Besides that very intense story line. Also the gun

shot to the head could have been

alot louder, you know, something to throw us on the end of our chair. Sounded

more like a pancake hit him in the head, that it did his skull getting blown

open. I just finished a little

animation with gun shots and have a couple of killer ones if your curious.

One of them is kinda futuristic to go with the gun you have.

 Also I was confused at the end when the animation stopped. I though my

puter,

locked up. Maybe you could add a "...to be continued." or something to that

nature.


Also kill the quake symbol. Create your own icon for the comic book. It would

be of better

taste.


Keep us informed on the next scene. =8>)-


-DG-



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