Re: FLASH: New cartoon!

[naoki mitsuse]

 hello Brad,



It looked really good on my mac 210 NN 4.0  The animation moved

smoothly, and the way the story was told kept me hooked.  I especially

like the trigger scene.  On a more personal note, the red borders on

the animation frame bothered me a little since that red is so saturated.

It felt like it was competing to much with what's going on within the

animation.  I like the way you are using black.  It is working very

effectively.

Looking forward to seeing more.



naoki









brad merritt wrote:



> Hey everybody!

> Please tell me what you think of my cartoon. It may take a while to load,

> but I promise that it is worth it.

> Brad Merritt

>

> http://www.geocities.com/Paris/LeftBank/7833/chapter1.html











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