Re: FLASH: Virtual Paper Doll

[Kevin White]

Paul,


Nice work -you're so modest!


The only recommendations I have would be to enlarge the art by moving the

menus to either the left or right side. Can the "Boot," "Bottom," etc. menu

be joined with the "Hair," "Eyes," etc. menu? Since they function to alter

the character they can be one piece. The most difficult menu to work with

would be the "tattoos" selection (10 items) so I understand why you

separated them.


Although the characters eyes are open I don't see the pupils -not like

that's a bad effect. The eyes opening and closing is nice. Maybe add her

eyes moving left to right occasionally (following the menus as they are

cued?). One last thing...move the "Virtual Vampirella Paperdoll" logo to

the top of the effects menu. It's a fun visual and might compliment the

page more as a header item.


Again, nice work and best of luck.



Respectfully,



Kevin White

Fusionary Media

http://www.fusionary.com



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