RE: FLASH:check it out

[Matthew Gardner]

(Maraya)

] My first shockwave creation is at:

] http://www.upshot.com/draft4/flash.html

] I would really appreciate any comments at all.


Very interesting. Like the intro animation, something to watch rather

than the standard 'Loading...' text. The navigation is very straight

forward and makes for excellent interactivity. I believe the design

serves its purpose well. My only critisim is of the large mouse

pointer moving to click the paragraph on the opening subscreens.

>From an interface standpoint it's difficult to read the text until

the pointer has stopped moving, and absolutely so as the pointer

'clicks' the text. There are four recommendations I have for this:


[1] Have the pointer click on something else (for example, a round

button that zooms-large as the pointer gets close to it, then

clicks down-up with the sound).


[2] Start the pointer lower so it doesn't cross the paragraph.


[3] Remove the pointer animation.


[4] Or don't change anything at all - it's a very minor observation.


Hope this helps,

 Matthew Gardner

 Creative Director

 Core Communications, Inc.


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